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A bike ride to the river

Louise had decided to go for a bike ride just before lunchtime and took some food with her so if she got peckish she could stop for a while. It wasn’t long before she found herself heading for the river. It was ages since she and Graham had been there. When they were first courting they’d often head to the countryside and find a secluded spot to talk, or kiss, or whatever. Leaving her bike under a hedge in the farmer’s field, Louise walked in the glorious sunshine down towards the water. The grass was long; almost knee-length and it tickled her bare legs as she made her way through the field. She left her backpack under an old oak tree and removed her trainers and socks. She carefully made her way down the dry riverbank to the water. The river was quite shallow; there had been little rain during the last couple of weeks. Louise picked her way through the small boulders that were usually under water, trying not to slip over while looking for tiddlers. There was a small pool to her left and she thought she saw a little trout quickly dart away out of the corner of her eye. It felt like forever since Graham had suggested coming anywhere like this.

Graham had been different lately. He’d been promoted at work, then offered a partnership and now spent so much time in meetings. But the bank balance showed that the long hours were paying off. The loan they’d taken to buy into the business was settled. It was their tenth anniversary next year and they were planning a three-week holiday to Australia and New Zealand. They’d already saved enough to pay for that holiday twice over. Louise thought how wonderful it would be having him to herself for so long. Even after the ten years or so that they’d been together, Louise still felt a tingle when he looked at her in that special way.
After a paddle in what little water there was, Louise thought she’d sit and eat her lunch under the tree and perhaps even have a nap. She clambered back up the riverbank, her feet brown from the dry soil. She wiped them on the grass at the top. Walking back to the tree, Louise picked an armful of the wild poppies growing there. She’d only just sat down and replaced her footwear, when she heard a car on the other side of the river. She was only just able to see the top of the windscreen of a convertible car pull up beyond the hedge on the far side. A tall man with bright red hair appeared, holding hands with a petite blonde girl. Louise slunk down in the grass, hoping that they wouldn’t see her; she didn’t want to spoil their fun. The girl giggled as the man pulled her down into the long grass. He made a big play of throwing his clothes in the air as he stripped them off.

Louise heard the girl cry, ‘What if someone sees us?’
‘If anyone is there would they let us know please?’ the man shouted loudly in reply.
A squeal of delight followed.

Louise thought about coughing or something, but she decided silence was best. She actually felt a bit embarrassed, but dare not move in case they realised they had an observer. She thought about how she and Graham would have done exactly the same in years gone by. How they’d made dreams for the future. Planning a family that had never arrived. Louise had always wanted to be a mum and felt sad to think she’d never have any children of her own. They’d agreed as a couple that artificial insemination by donor was not for them and Graham absolutely refused to consider adoption. He said that he couldn’t imagine bringing up someone else’s child.
Louise tried to eat her crisps quietly, but she was sure that the lovers would be too wrapped up in their own thing to hear her.

It wasn’t that long before they finished. They went back to the car. The tall man with his arm around the small blonde’s shoulders and she with her arm around his waist. It reminded Louise of how she and Graham had walked together. She put her rubbish into her backpack and went to retrieve her bike.

Louise popped into town and went to the bank before heading back up the hill towards their home. She hated that hill. It was really hard work, but she had managed to make it to the top that day.

When she arrived home, she took her bike around the back and put it in the garage. She stroked the paintwork of her new four-wheel drive as she walked passed it.

Graham had hoped he’d been clever. Before his promotion and the subsequent offer to buy into the business, he’d decided to put all of their joint assets into her name, including their home. His thinking had been that if everything had failed, then he’d lost nothing.
Louise was having fillet steak, new potatoes, bought from the local market gardens, and salad for her tea. She scraped the potatoes and prepared the salad. She didn’t have the faintest idea what time Graham would be in, probably chairing another meeting. She hoped not.

At 5:15pm Louise heard the car pull onto the gravel drive. She had butterflies in her tummy. Graham was early for a change. He had the roof down on the convertible, as the evening was still warm. His red hair glinting in the late afternoon sun. She wondered how he’d feel when he realised their joint account was empty. Probably the same way he’d feel when he saw his bags were packed.

Sadness came over her as she heard the door open. Louise took a deep breath.
‘How was your day?’ she asked.
‘Busy. Been stuck in the office all day. And you?’
‘Oh I’ve had an interesting day. You’ll never guess who I saw down by the river.’

 

By Elizabeth Stevenson

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