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A Place for the Night

We found the cellar on the second night as we were picking our way slowly over a debris field and I almost fell through the splintered trap door.


"Watch out! For Gods sake! Be careful." Tom yelled as my foot slipped through into a void and I tumbled sideways. Before I crashed into the bricks and broken wood he grabbed me and pulled me back.

"This is stupid." He said. "One of us will get hurt."

"Right well why are we here?" I asked angrily. "Who was it who said we would stay put when everyone else was leaving? Who was it who decided to head back into the zone instead of going to the medical centre?"

"You know what we heard about the med centres and there must be a chance we will find a place in here somewhere."

I didn't want to tell him that we would not get much further before dark and that there were so many pockets of fire and that by clawing our way over the debris field we could fall through into one at any time. I didn't want to tell him because it was so bloody obvious and anyway it hardly mattered
anymore. For the hundredth time today I resisted the urge to scream long and hard at the top of my voice. Instead I took a look at our two children, Lisa who was seven and Jack just three years older, who where all out on their feet, and wondered if we would ever find anywhere safe for a night.

"I think this is it." I said, "I don't think I can go any further. We
are all dead on our feet.. The children can't go on. We will just have to make some sort of shelter here." Tom just nodded in reply.

We began to gather some of the debris which could make some sort of shelter for us. But when Tom tried to move the panel my foot had gone through, he discovered the opening with the wooden stairway leading down into a black hole. Our torch showed that they led down into a cellar and although it
was damp and musty, and Lisa insisted she could hear something moving round down in the dark, we decided that this was to be the place we would spend the night. Tom went down first and set up some of the candles from our survival pack, then shouted for us. I followed with the children. The space that opened up as we climbed down the stairway was dry and at least had a roof and was enclosed. The cellar had been a large storage area and workshop with wooden crates and cardboard boxes stacked against one wall and shelves full of tools and work benches against the other. There was a light smell of sawn wood and some crates in various stages of manufacture. There had been a collapse and the roof at the far end had caved in, but in spite of this the rest of the roof was secure and appeared safe. We rummaged round and found some useful items. There were cardboard boxes and we took out the packing, bundled together some old paper and bits of a broken box and carefully lit a fire near the foot of the stair. Other cardboard boxes were broken up and flattened to make beds and we placed a packing case and a wooden crate for a table with four small boxes for seats. I took out the last of the food from my pack. Tom took the last few pieces of our bread and examined them. Then he took a pocket knife and scraped off the mould which was starting to appear. I made a couple of dry sandwiches from the bread and the bits of cheese that were left and was starting to wrap the odd bits of cheese when Tom came over and whispered to me.
"Use it all, we won't need any more after tonight."

We sat round the table to eat the sandwiches.


"Is that all there is mum?" Jack asked when he saw his sandwich.

"Yes." I replied. "That's all for now but here you are you can have mine too. I'm not hungry." I cut my piece of sandwich in half and gave a piece to each of the children. . "Here,." said Tom, "you can have mine too. But when you have had that you need to sleep."

They eat in airy silence, sitting quietly, chewing slowly, their eyes wide with tiredness and fear.. My two bubbly giggling children were just a memory now. Over the past few days they had become quieter as we had trudged from one Army Decon unit to the next, each time only to be turned away to follow other trudging people to the next one.

"We will see if we can find something else for the morning but for now you need to sleep."

He hesitated for a moment then reached into his trouser pocket and took out the pill box a soldier had given him at the checkpoint earlier today before he had turned us back.

"If we all take three of these we will get a good sleep and I am sure we will find some help tomorrow." He put the box on the table and turned away, then as an after thought he reached across and kissed the children and smiled. "I'm just going to look round outside. Take the tablets and get a good sleep" He said and climbed up the steps to the entrance. I looked at the pill box then slowly took it and opened it. As I emptied the tablets onto my hand I felt like laughing. Once again here I was having to take responsibility for the family. I sorted out the tablets, gave three each to the children and gave them the last of the water to help them swallow.

Lisa and Jack lay down on the makeshift beds and I put their coats over them like blankets. I sat on the floor between them and for a few minutes I stroked their heads and hummed. They were so tired that they just lay very quiet and still and then in moments they were asleep. Gradually all sounds of breathing stopped.

I followed Tom up the steps to the opening. It was dark now. He was sitting on a ledge at the top of the stairs looking out across the wasteland. He turned when he heard me his face streaming with tears. And each tear track cut through the grime and reflected the light from the cellar like rods of lightening.

"Is it....? Are they.? He asked.. I nodded

"How could it have happened?" He asked, "Someone must have known. They must."

I stayed silent, too tired to speak, too sad to blame anyone, too torn with grief to care why it had been my job to hand out the pills. I sat on the ledge and held out my hand, Tom reached over to take it, but instead I opened it and he saw the three tablets I had brought for him. He took them from me and for a moment looked like he was going to hug me, or kiss me or say something that mattered instead, "I don't understand any of this." was all he said. Then he pushed the tablets into his mouth and struggled to swallow them. He coughed and started to gag. "Water" was all he managed to
say. I ran down to see if there was any water left for him, grabbed the bottle but it was empty and when I got back he was lying still propped against a low wall with his feet dangling into the cellar and a tortured strangled look on his face..

I sat for a while next to him at the edge of the opening, looking round at the flattened and burning buildings, the mounds of rubble that had been the markers for people's lives. I wondered why it had come to this, but as always there were only more questions and no answers.

After sitting for a while, I dragged him down into the cellar and lay him next to the children and I lay down on the floor between Lisa and Jack. The sores that had been growing on my arms and face were hurting now and I was starting to feel sick. I took out the pill box and looked at David in the dying glow. "You didn't count them, you bastard. You couldn't even get that right for me." As the fire died I lay between my children and hoped sleep would come soon.

By Jim Bennett

 

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